For those who loves to complain about my - and marks for my speech:
-I am not english nor american or whatever: I am french, thus:
I am using a french speech form like this:
"hey, x Said.
-Hi, how are you? Y replied.
-I'm fine, thank you." X answered.
(sentence too long to be part of the speech) X looked straight in Y's eyes.
"What happened? X asked...
That's why I'm looking for someone to correct this in english, as writing then translating is tiring, as nobody wants to, don't complain. If you don't like it, then propose your help to correct it.
This message is mainly for Hikari Nova.