Eight-year-old Mia is just another player of JumpStart 3rd Grade, only, for her, she's not in a computer game. This is her reality, and she's already on thin ice with being the new girl in Polly Spark's class at school. Written from an eight-year-old's POV, so I do need critique on how I'm writing. Playthrough of game (without too much repetitiveness) as if it was real. R&R!
Maddy is a timid girl who comes to JumpStart in a ship when she is three years old. Without her family, Maddy feels lonely and sad. How can she get used to living in such a strange place so far away from home? The situation doesn't seem so hopeless for the other kids. (Note: Rating may go up.)