Remus's first Hogsmeade trip

This is my first fanfic so please tell me if it's bad or not. basically the marauders go to Hogsmeade where they annoy Lily Evans, impersonate some Slytherins, get hyped on Honeyjukes sweets and discover a new tunnel for the map. ( I do not own any of the characters they are all form the wonderful J.K. Rowling, this includes the setting and the theme. I own the plot)