My Immortal--A Reader's View

I have made it my goal to finish this awful story(partially to help my writer's block) and decided to post it. Let's see how far I get before I crack...Rated M for terribly written sex scenes and cursing. Warning: Side effects may include loss of breath from laughing too much, the melting of your brain, decrease in IQ, and/or the sudden urge to kill someone. ABANDONED