The ending of the fanfiction 'The Maddening Crowd' by Deadwoodpecker

This is the ending of the maddening crowd, "/s/5239218/4/The-Maddening-Crowd", I created an ending that made more sense, so read the link above first, but if you believe chapter 4 is the ending that is your choice, but i believe the ending isn't truly done until i see a criminal being punished and tortured. Yes, Mackenzie deserved the punishment