My Immortal by Tara (Properly Beta'd)

Someone created their dream of a story, placing themselves in Harry Potter. A girl looking for the attention she deserved. I don't know if she truly cut, or wanted to die, but I do know this. She had every right to post her story, and her beta-reader is as much at fault as she is. No one has the right to judge this girl. She was only trying to write, to escape reality. Who doesn't?