Legend of Link: The Warrior of Truth

I have re-written my story and would love help due to the fact that I am hopelessly lost as to how to write stories, but hopefully I get more readers and reviewers which means I won't waste my time writing junk I WANT TO KNOW THAT THIS IS GETTING READ! What would happen in Twilight Princess if Link lost the final battle? !NEW TIMELINE! Anything Nintendo is not mine.