Can't Be Forgotten

I wrote this a while ago, when playing Amnesia (The Dark Descent), which is a freaking awesome game. Anyway: multiple chapters, pre-Lazulis, with the entire team of mercenaries. Dramatic synopsis: "The team discovers a passage beneath a client's mansion that leads them to a dark secret that helps Syrenne cope with her past."(Dun dun dun!) Reviews are always welcome!