The Tale of the Two Brothers

First fanfiction ever and I'm not a native speaker, so I'm really grateful for feedback. Jane, who was educated at home, decides to do her N.E.W.T.s at Hogwarts, the school the boy she had loved had gone to before he had died in the Battle of Hogwarts. What will it be like to meet his friends he had told her so much about there? Things get even more complicated when she meets