Skulduggery Pleasant story Mickey Raider

I do not own Skulduggery, Valkyrie, Fletcher, Ghastly and so on. Mickey, Jack and a few others that you won't recognize are my OCs, or other peoples OCs. Mickey is looking for her dead father, Fletcher when Valkyrie says something that shocks everyone.. This is my first fanfic so please leave a review, and tell me what I can do better. Rated T for Language. Thanks