Dil's Awakening

This is a Dan and Phil gaming fic. It contains no smut/romance at all, just some good ol' video game terror. This is my first fic of this type, and honestly would love to receive any criticisms. This story was inspired by a youtube Creepypasta video and a disscussion I had in the comments of it. Why are you still reading this? I promise the story is better(if only by a little)