Timeskip into the Future

I've been writing this for a while and I want to know what you all think of my story. Don't worry if you want to see more, I have a lot more already written but I want to see if people like it. It's a bit short but I hope you enjoy it! I'm rating this a bit high as there will be lime in this so be prepared. I am putting this story on hiatus as I am rewriting this.