The Dursleys and The Boy Who Lived: Chapter 1

Hi all, I'm writing this because while I liked the original books, I had a difficult time with the Dursleys. The Dursleys always seemed ridiculous and over the top to me, so I wanted to try and explore a different type of guardians for the Boy Who Lived. This is one of my first pieces of writing, and my first "published piece", so any suggestions and criticisms are appreciated.