I adopted and changed the return of lil gideon New Title:Kidnapped!

I adopted and changed the returnvof lil rry,but if you want I can repost chap 1 and countinue the orignal. New plot: Dipper has made Mabel feel terrible and runs into the forest,unaware Bill plans to kidnap her. The next day she's gone. Dipper looks everywhere,but can't find her. Until he finds a note saying Bill has her in the dreamscape.What does Bill want with Mabel?R&R