Nesting Dolls

What didn't we get to see and hear in S5 E13: Nesting Dolls when Grissom went to Sara's apartment? GSR fanfic. First fanfic I've ever written so, please let me know what you think. I purposely kept all episode dialogue and simply filled in the blanks with how I imagine their conversation went once the cameras turned away from them. I do not own these characters.