The Orange and the Silver Mew

Hi, first time doing a Pokemon story. The OC is me as I always pretend I'm part of the Pokemon HeartGold game. It will be different than the game. Please Review and I'll update it. I'm also of thinking of doing a Harry Potter and D-Gray Man stories (One each). I better get this story up. Oh, if you think the rating should be up and the story is not made for Teens, PM or reviewx