Whimpered

How I can put this nicely? I really don't care if you like my spin on Ms. Rowling's characters. Don't like it then don't read it. Yes. There is boy/boy and girl/girl and hey...I'm even gonna get wild and put girl/boy in some stories. Issues with my grammer n stuff? Be patient. The grasshopper is out of town. Whimpered is about Draco with a dash of Pans and a nice dose of Neville.