Me and DW

First, this is my first attempt at doing a chapter story and this is hard and scary for me as a beginner so I hope I do this right. Focusing on the story, D.W. has invited herself to me and decides to start running me and wants me to do what she wants to do. See how I fair dealing with D.W. Please remember, Nice Reviews or NONE at all, but I'm open to help and suggestions.