My Immortal REVISED

You know about the infamous fiction know as "My Immortal" by one Tara Gilesbie. Well, this is My version. Something that makes sense and will be enjoyable to read in a good way. With people in character and a real plot! The point in this isn't "I'm better then Tara!" (Everyone is). This is just a fan doing what fans do, writing a Fan Fiction on something we love.