Loving Like Dying

I'm dipping into darkness here; at first, flirtatiously and then going all the way. Katniss mostly waxing poetic/philosophic on love and death here until she gets burned. Picks up with MJ and is mostly canon-compliant, though I add/expand/imagine a few details and change the very end (because I had to). I'm incredibly interested in reviews and would love to hear what you think.