Don't Go With Orochimaru, Sasuke!

Alright, this here is an ACTUAL paper that I wrote and TURNED IN for my English short story. I'm putting the grade I got when the teacher hands us back the papers. *fingers crossed * Welp, basically my OC is trying to convince Sasuke not to go with Orochimaru... so yeah, you get the picture. WARNING: extreme crackyness! (GOG, I can't believe I actually turned this in...)