Proving His Love

Set in the Marauders' time at Hogwarts. From James Potter's point of view. Set in his 7th year. This is how I imagine James Potter told Lily he was in love with her. And how I imagine she made him prove it to her. Sorry if it sucks. It's my second attempt at writing fanfiction. But maybe you could review and tell me what you liked and what parts sucked. I'd really appreciate it. Th