When The Night Comes Falling (Original Revised Part 2 ongoing)

This is a corrected and changed version of my original story, When the night comes falling from the sky. It starts out as a rewrite of the blue spine classic Clue of the Screeching Owl. With it being modified for modern times. Think of it as a pulp fiction version of a blue spine. Rated acceptable for teens, but a few areas can get racy. If you've read my stuff before, you know.