To LOVE Ru - The Unknown Darkness

(I DON'T OWN TO LOVE RU) I just started writing this fiction and I somehow decided to rewrite/work the whole To LOVE Ru series and change events that happened and did custom events while some will be the same as the series. I expect reviews that can help me with the writing and more. Names can be misspelled, etc as even I are into the series I still forget how to write names