RWBY: Team KBLT - Part 1

This is the first part in a, I don't how many, part series, for my OC RWBY Team. In this first part, a young boy named Kupari Ukkonan is taken to be trained as Huntsmen, by an old man in a desert plain. I would appreciate any advice you have to help me get better at writing after you read it. (For any of those who read Something More, it is postponed for right now)