The Twins Fangs

This is the story of a young shinobi who's journey leads him to the hidden leaf village after his village and entire clan were wiped out by a newly risen enemy, one who bears a resemblance to red clouds of yesteryear. He must find some way to avenge his clan and bring honor to his new home in Konoha. (Please review and tell me what u think, but be courteous and constructive)