Beautiful, Broken, Deadly

Harry grew up with his relatives, but they never treated him quite right. When he discovers the magical world, Harry discovers that he is the brother of the famous Boy-Who-Lived, raised by his parents. The quiet, dark Harry is placed into Slytherin, and soon, he discovers a whole new world of magic he is only too happy to use... My first fanfic, tell me what's good and what's not!