By Princess Sakura E Gryffin-Claw•Updated: 6 Oct 2004•Published: 6 Oct 2004•
1,857 words
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Adventure/Suspense
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Harry P.
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Rating: K+
•In Progress
ok it's not much of a action in the first chapter, and there is only one person present, so u know not much goes on in talking sort in the first chap, well i'd like it if u gave me a chance, R&R