This is a VERY rough draft of my first ever fanfic. It follows Eli Chase, a 17-year-old kid living the worst part of Gotham until unforeseen circumstances force him to move into Wayne Manor. Please give me as much constructive criticism as possible, as I want to improve this story as much as I can.

This is a VERY rough draft of the first 6 chapters of my first ever fanfiction. It follows Eli Chase, a 17-year-old boy living in the worst part of Gotham until tragedy leads him and his family to move into Wayne Manor. Please give me as much constructive criticism as possible, as I want to improve this story as much as possible.