You know how Ebony is so anti-prep that if the preps were a race different from goths, she would be arrested for libel? Well, my character obeys teaches her a lesson. No, seriously, I'm taking random excerpts of My Immortal and inserting Mr. Sensible in there. OC is not a self insert. Rated M for strong language. Since this is more popular, I wish for more positive reviews.

Ok, so, have you ever found a fanfic that just made your blood boil and infuriated you to the point of wanting to punch the author? I've found mine. If you can absolutely not stand sexism, because it's in the fanfic I'm doing this commentary on, please don't read. However, if you are tolerant, see what makes me just so angry.

My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie is known as one of the worst fanfics ever. So, the noob fanfic author is going commentate on it. Read and Review.