a preview of my latest work based on Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets video game. i actually have a lot more written already i just want opinions and i don't want to give too much away so here's the first 2 chapters only. please construction criticism is welcomed here.
based ona game id like to make when i can programm good enough. the story will be bery long just read the story that includes better description.
the beggining of the story was good but by the mid end i juts rushed it to get it out there. probably a sequel make maybe?
It took me reall yhard work to make this. also please sing it as a rap its cool
Part 2 of evil upraising 6 just kidding actually 4. Im am making another one so yeah its is long.
part 2 of omarses' polemon series.
I was lazy so i didnt finish this for a while it tool me like half a year but it shouldnt've been that long. anyway enjoy this story, and theres more to come with regard to other storys soon. anyway again, harry xi is sent to hogwarts and he has abilities beyond any other wizor dout there, but will tragedy strike him? of course it will, its a harry poter book for gosh sake!
i started this last year (2013) but left it alone until this year so i finished it to publish this year. also i decided that i DIDNT FINISH IT YOULL HAVE TO WAIT TILL NEXT YEAR TO READ THE NEXT PART btw this is non cannon to my evil upraising series im done with that one
the refvised one i promise. honestly i think i did a butter job on this one but still it was just getting way too long so i cut it short after a while. it was completely filling 12 pages on google docs. but still this one has more story and a better ending than the previous one, the previous ending is rushed and crap compared to this one. i hopes you like this one more.
my vedio game but its only part 1 of book 1 as of now. it will be much longer with 5 books and parts.. everytime i update i will post in a new chapter. this is the untitiled nveol then i made a aname for it
final conclusion to the specific series ultimate we all know in our very hearts. it is an epic battle will tomarse contain the win?
AFTER DUNNY FINNISHES HIS FAUVORITE GAME HE HAS MEET A SUPRISE FROM FAR BEYOND THE REACHES OF THE PLANET EARTH BUT WILL HE SURVIVE WELL NEVER KNOW UNLESS YOP READ THIS STORY BY JASON MERECEDE? OH AND ALSO THIS IS NOT THE UNTITILED NOVEL I MENTONED BEFORE THIS IS SOMETHING ELSE THAT HAS TODO WITH IT.
GOKU GIVES HIS DRAGGON BALLD TO SOMEONE BUT THEN SOMETHING HAPPENES.
Well this is it guys thanks for supporting and im done with this cry cry it was good. stay tuned for grenfield flim festival youll get a suprise by me.