A story i decided to work on about Peter Pan long before he was Peter Pan. Back when he was still Malcolm and was sold by his Father to a Blacksmith. Obviously most characters will be OC's due to the fact that Peter Pan is the oldest character and this story takes place long before he even had Rumpelstiltskin. Please tell me your opinions! I want to know if this is any good!

A story about the first girl in the glade. Its in the first year or so of the first group of gladers