This is a story I wrote in 15 minutes. It's Voldemort attacking Harry through the mind while the order watch. I would like to know what everyone thinks. Reviews appreciated!

I have lost a lot of love for Anita Blake in her last 10 books or so. I will rant if asked about it. So I am going to leave this story where it stopped at the beginning and try for a new story. Without a ruined heroine as one of the characters.